deirdrearchleone:

“One of the simplest ways to make the audience like a character is to show him liking other people. One of the easiest ways to make the audience care about a character is to show him caring about other people. We care about Harry Potter in no small part because he cares so much about his friends. It’s impossible to imagine Harry seeing Hermione get hurt and feeling anything but horror and guilt, no matter how terrible a fight they might have had beforehand. Katniss is by design a more prickly and “difficult” protagonist than Harry is, or than Moss seems intended to be, but we care about her from the start because we see how deeply she loves her sister and her willingness to sacrifice herself to protect her. Bad writers, though, often make the mistake of thinking that you make a character likable by showing that other characters like him, and make the audience care about him by showing that other characters care about him. This tends to have exactly the opposite effect. At a certain point the reader starts to wonder what’s so great about this guy that everyone is showering him with praise, and starts actively wanting to see him fail or be told off.”

https://fail-fandomanon.dreamwidth.org/325399.html?thread=1869956375#cmt1869956375
(via pitviperofdoom)

riptidepublishing:

operahousebookworm:

megan-cutler:

iamalwayswriting:

suburbanmomromanceclub:

File this under “super obvious yet I always seem to forget it.”

I don’t write romance (I totally respect people who do, though!) but this is also great writing advice in general! What is preventing the protagonist from achieving their goal?

Why can’t these two people be together now?

Why can’t the mystery be solved now?

Why can’t they overthrow the evil overlord now?

If you don’t have a solid answer for these questions, that’s a good indicator that the plot could use some more work.

Also test your answer a little bit. If it’s as thin as they’re just refusing to sit down and have a simple conversation, you might want to re-think how things are going.

As a beta reader/editor, I tend to ask this question a lot: “Why are they doing it this way when there’s a much easier path available?” That’s not to say that they should take the easier path, because that would usually be boring. Instead, the point is that the question needs an answer–either eliminate the easier path or give them a very clear reason for not taking it. (And if I’m asking the question, that reason isn’t as clear as you think it might be.)

I find it very difficult to root for characters who have a sensible option available and just don’t take it. If the only reason is “Because there wouldn’t be a story otherwise,” you haven’t actually found the story yet.

And this is why the Big Misunderstanding as a primary plot device is almost universally disliked.

prokopetz:

Expository dialogue techniques that don’t rely on characters randomly explaining things to each other that they should already know, but do rely on your characters being obnoxious gits:

1. Character A fucks something up hilariously; character B upbraids them at great length about exactly what they did wrong.

2. Character A wildly misreads a situation; character B corrects their misconceptions.

3. Character A tells a complicated and implausible lie; character B points out the obvious holes in their story.

4. Character A can’t find their destination; character B provides rambling and discursive directions.

5. Character A has a straightforward question; character B requests a series of extremely pedantic clarifications.

a (not-so) brief overview of markets that will pay you actual money in exchange for your short fiction

theprettiestboy:

melaniehoping:

Writing is a rough gig. Get paid where you can. Here’s a bunch of places that will pay professional rates for genre (fantasy/science fiction/horror) short stories. All these markets take (and actually publish) unsolicited submissions – you don’t need an agent, and you don’t need to have previously published works. 

Remember to format your shit, write a simple cover letter, don’t send the same story to more than one place at a time, make sure submissions windows are actually open, and never respond to rejection letters ever. Have fun!

(Information gathered from both Submissions Grinder – an essential resource for people actively submitting their work – and my own excessive and somewhat ridiculous reading habits.)

Current as of May 2018. Markets are listed alphabetically. Detailed info below the cut.

Keep reading

R

On Writing Erotica

sanspatronymic:

For @a-different-equation, who wanted some pointers. Not sure how applicable this is to your WIP, but here goes: 

Focus on foreplay/arousal. It’s all about the build up. I try to describe characters’ arousal not only in terms of what is turning them on, but how being turned on feels for that person (is it physical, emotional, fun, scary, tingly, hot, all-over, or a quiet stirring in one specific place?). Especially when writing sex in service of the plot, arousal is never the only thing a character is feeling in that moment. How do those other emotions impact what’s turning the character on? Do they notice something they never noticed before? How long it takes them to realize/give in to being turned on? 

Will they/won’t they tension is so delicious. Use this tension to build towards sex. Pour it on. I think it works best when you apply the rule of three (ie a ratio of 2 no-we-shouldn’t’s to 1 oh-yes-we-should). I prefer the no-we-shouldn’ts to be very mild. I don’t want to make the reader think they actually won’t bone–that’s what the reader wants, so let that ultimately be what the characters want. The reader should know this tension is only a tease or a bit of doubt which characters need to overcome to be able to throw caution to the wind, to be vulnerable enough to be sexy with abandon.

I like small details, so I try to think like a cinematographer–getting close-ups of the curve where thigh meets hips, of lips parting or being licked, of clothes being removed and immediately replaced by hands. If it’s a sex scene with a lot of romantic passion, then every part of each other’s bodies can be beautiful. Pale hairs along the back of the neck? Beautiful. The way a buttock or a hip or a stomach perfectly fills the other person’s hand? Oh mama. The little white zig-zags of stretch marks? Gorgeous. It’s also a nice way to avoid having to only talk about genitals or falling into too many cliches. What are the random, not-conventionally-sexy parts of the characters that the other finds attractive and why? My favorite parts of my partner’s body are the two freckles on their right ear and a swirl in their facial hair on the left jaw. People are weird. Letting fictional characters be weird makes their attraction feel more natural to me, more human. 

If you build the tension right, writing about people exploring/appreciating/worshipping each other’s bodies can be super erotic, even if you don’t include a nitty-gritty, ‘insert tab A into hole B’ description of the acts. Plus, again, that way you avoid only having to talk about genitals (I like genitals, but variety is the spice of life and all that).

These are my kind-of-guiding principles. I’m sure people have different opinions on what they like, what works for them, etc. Fellow smut writers, what do you think about when writing ‘the good bits’?

officialqueer:

lianabrooks:

hellishues:

saltenecker:

someone in a fanfic: s-stutters in embarrassment

me, closing the tab: sorry I must go

Unrealistic Stuttering: “S-sorry I-I d-d-didn’t m-mean t-to…”

Realistic Stuttering: “Sorry, I uh… I didn’t mean- I didn’t mean to do that…”

When people stutter, they usually reword what they’re saying as they speak, and subconsciously insert “filler words” such as “uh, like, you know,” and etc.

*puts on speech therapist hat*

ACTUALLY! It depends on why they are stuttering. 

A Nervous Stutter results in what is called Mazing, or rewording the sentence. That is the classic “I, um… well I… look it’s just that… so we…” that @hellishhues is talking about. When someone is mazing their words you’re seeing a form of Speech Apraxia where the brain is having trouble forming verbal speech. This can be brought on by brain damage, memory loss, anxiety, nerves, and several other things. 

The root cause of a nervous stutter is a disconnect between the mouth and the brain. 

With this you will also sometimes see the classic “S-s-s-sorry…” especially if the person has been training to speak clearly and is now at a point of fatigue or stress where they are not mentally capable of forming the words.

The other kind of stutter is a Physical Stutter, sometimes referred to as slurring, and another facet of Speech Apraxia. This stutter is caused when the muscles of the mouth, tongue, and throat are physically unable to form certain sounds. This is most often seen in the very young and victims of brain trauma. 

Sounds are acquired at different ages, so a 2-year-old will probably not be able to clearly pronounce certain words (which is why toddler sound so off when they’re written with developed dialogue). These mis-pronunciations are sometimes referred to as lisping, but only if the sounds are run together. If the person starts and restarts the sound because they got it wrong, it can also sound like the classic sound stutter. 

But it all depends on why the character is stuttering!

Do they have Speech Apraxia, Audio Processing Disorder, muscle dysfunction, or another medical reason to stutter? (1)

Are they stuttering because of anxiety, stress, or fatigue? (2)

Does the stutter stem from intoxication or blood loss? (3)

All of those will sound different! 

1 – Will have mazing, repeated sound stutters, and be the classic stutter that annoys OP.

2 – This is where you’ll see the repetition stutter, mazing, rephrasing, and filler words.

3 – This is where you are more likely to see starts and stops and slurring of words. 

My mum has apraxia and I just wanted to say that’s one of the most concise and clear ways I’ve seen it explained, thank you!

prokopetz:

rashaka:

prokopetz:

alarajrogers:

prokopetz:

theladyscribe:

prokopetz:

I get the impression that a lot of fanfic writers tend to get tangled up in the idea that a fanfic needs to have a single, unified narrative from beginning to end. Thing is, that’s not actually true – there are lots of literary forms that can be adapted to fanfic that have no plot to speak of.

Take the picaresque, for example: in its simplest form, it’s a frame story about a journey from point A to point B, in which each chapter forms a self-contained micro-story about a single encounter that happens along the way. Apart from the protagonist and perhaps one or two companions, each chapter features an entirely new setting and cast of characters, and while there may be a thematic arc to the work taken as a whole, there’s no narrative continuity between episodes, which can be read in essentially any order.

(Also, many works in the genre maintain a running gag whereby every single chapter ends with the protagonist fleeing for her life for some reason, thereby moving her on to the next episode, though that’s by no means required.)

I mean, that’s just one example, but the point is: if you want to write a massive 100 000 word fic, but maintaining continuity gives you hives, there are forms that don’t require continuity. Not everything needs to be an elaborately plotted continuing narrative – a long-form work can totally be just a bunch of stuff that happens. Many well-respected works of literature are exactly that.

a frame story about a journey from point A to point B, in which each chapter forms a self-contained micro-story about a single encounter that happens along the way

Isn’t this essentially what we do with Five Times (Plus One) fics? They’re not always about a journey, but they fit the same narrative structure: each segment is (or should be) self-contained, a story within the story, that is thematically connected to the other parts of the complete work.

And while Five Times fics are usually shorter in length (I’d guess that most fall within the 1k-5k wordcount range), I have definitely seen some that surpass 50k.

Mm – not so much.

It’s true that both are episodic after a fashion, but the distinguishing feature of the five-plus-one fic is that they often don’t stand alone; many consist of fragmentary vignettes that can only be fully understood with reference to the specific work on which the story is based.

The picaresque story, conversely, ls self-contained not only on the whole, but on the level of individual chapters. Each episode presents everything you need to know about the characters involved, at least as far as that particular episode is concerned, and any needed backstory is directly incorporated by reference, reminiscence or anecdote. (Or, in plain English, if you need to know it, somebody will mention it.) It’s an intensely economical form, narrative-wise.

By that definition no fanfic can be a picaresque, because all fanfics draw from the larger work that they are a fanfic of. If I write a story about Kirk and Spock exploring different alien planets, that’s still dependent on the audience’s knowledge of Kirk and Spock… and if I don’t draw on what the audience knows, I’m failing at the great strength of fanfic, the thing that is most valuable about the form, which is that it does draw on information the reader already knows, so you don’t need to actually write down everything that the fanfic reader needs to know to fully understand the work.

All prose fiction draws on information the reader already knows. In this respect, fanfiction isn’t exceptional; like all fiction aimed at a particular target audience, it simply makes certain assumptions about what the reader already knows. A Star Trek fanfic that’s written in such a way that it’s literally impossible to figure out how the plot hangs together if you’re not already versed in Star Trek lore is no different from – for example – a cyberpunk story whose plot only makes sense if you know how public key cryptography works; it’s merely the particular domain of knowledge you’re assuming on the part of your readers that differs.

I’m confused then: how can any fanfic meet the standards of your picaresque suggestion? in terms of drawing on assumptions of previous information? maybe can you restate how the picaresque would work in terms of fanfic?

Fanfic doesn’t actually need to be structured so that you need to be familiar with the source material in order to understand it. I’d argue that most well written fanfic isn’t set up that way at all; given a decent Star Trek fanfic, somebody who’d never heard of Star Trek before could probably figure out the premise and tenor of the show in fairly short order. Indeed, I’ve read plenty of ‘fics with no prior familiarity with the source material and gotten by just fine. Granted, it’s true that some ‘fic doesn’t work that way, but the notion that being incomprehensible to anyone who isn’t already immersed in the lore of the source material is a defining virtue of the medium is both extremely peculiar, and not an especially accurate assessment of most actual fanfic.

Basically, I think
a lot of

fanfic authors tend to hugely overestimate the importance of being familiar with the source material with respect to properly appreciating their work. In most cases, it just ain’t that critical.

Fanfiction Trope MASH-UP

meridelclarke:

Rules: Send me two (2) tropes from this list + a ship and I’ll describe how I’d combine them in the same story. 

  1. Historical AU 
  2. Royal AU 
  3. Modern AU 
  4. Coffee Shop AU 
  5. Bar/Restaurant
    AU 
  6. Bookshop AU 
  7. Florist AU  
  8. Hospital AU 
  9. Dance
    AU 
  10. Airport/Travel AU 
  11. Neighbour AU 
  12. Roommate AU 
  13. Detective AU 
  14. Bodyguard AU 
  15. Criminal
    AU 
  16. Prison AU 
  17. War AU 
  18. Circus AU 
  19. Summer Camp AU 
  20. Teacher AU 
  21. Dystopian AU 
  22. Space AU 
  23. Performer
    AU 
  24. Soulmate AU 
  25. Fairy Tale AU 
  26. Massage Fic  
  27. Sick/Injured Fic 
  28. Proposal Fic  
  29. Wedding Fic  
  30. Holiday Fic  
  31. Birthday Fic 
  32. Pregnancy Fic  
  33. Baby Fic 
  34. Vacation Fic  
  35. Bathtub Fic 
  36. Text/Letter Fic 
  37. Coming Out Fic   
  38. Grief
    Fic  
  39. Survival/Wilderness Fic  
  40. Almost Kiss 
  41. First Kiss 
  42. The Big Damn Kiss 
  43. Dance
    of Romance  
  44. Flowers of Romance 
  45. Chocolate
    of Romance  
  46. Blind Date  
  47. Not a Date  
  48. Fake Dating 
  49. Fake Married 
  50. Arranged Marriage  
  51. Accidentally Married 
  52. Marriage of Convenience 
  53. Mutual
    Pining 
  54. Secret Relationship  
  55. Established
    Relationship 
  56. Awful First Meeting 
  57. Forgotten First Meeting  
  58. Accidental Eavesdropping  
  59. Interrupted Declaration of Love 
  60. Poorly Timed
    Confession 
  61. Love Confession 
  62. Love Confessor (Character A confessing their love
    for Character B to Character C)  
  63. Everybody
    Knows/Mistaken for Couple 
  64. Star Crossed Lovers  
  65. It’s Not You, It’s Me 
  66. It’s Not You, It’s My
    Enemies  
  67. Character in Peril 
  68. Heroic Sacrifice 
  69. Flirting Under Fire 
  70. Locked in a Room 
  71. Twenty-Four
    Hours to Live  
  72. Stranded on A Desert
    Island 
  73. Stranded Due to Inclement Weather 
  74. Huddling for Warmth 
  75. Bed Sharing  
  76. Did They or Didn’t They? 
  77. In Vino Veritas  
  78. Above the Influence  
  79. Anger Born of Worry  
  80. Green-Eyed Epiphany  
  81. The Missus and the Ex 
  82. Second Love  
  83. Intimate Artistry  
  84. Married to the Job  
  85. Innocent Physical Contact 
  86. I Didn’t Mean to Turn
    You On 
  87. Aroused By Her Voice  
  88. Erotic
    Dreams 
  89. First Time 
  90. Unexpected Virgin 
  91. PWP 
  92. Kink 
  93. Makeovers 
  94. Hair Brushing/Braiding 
  95. Sleep
    Intimacy 
  96. Scars  
  97. Time Travel  
  98. Curses 
  99. Magical Accidents 
  100. Accidentally Saving
    the Day